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Lucidly in shadows. Poetry from a hand that writes misty.
This is magical. It somehow brings to mind the closing lyrics of Leonard Cohen’s song Stories Of The Street.
“We are so small between the stars, so large against the sky,
and lost among the subway crowds I try to catch your eye.”
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Jane! Wow! Thank you, those words by Cohen describe so well how I was feeling when I dreamed this. 15 minutes, and that song will be playing in my car. I am humbled by the high praise. Thank you my friend. 🙂
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I keep forgetting what an amazing poet you are…
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Thank You Jane, as are you. It is nice to sit here a bit with you and be amazing together. It means a great deal. 🙂
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I haven’t smiled or laughed a lot lately. Your message made me do both. I should take more care to keep in touch with you – you’re good for me 🙂
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That is a joy!
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Very interesting. The one/many waking, hunger, redirecting. All steeping us in your words. Well done.
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Thank you Qbit 🙂
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The rabbit and the wold, and the form makes me think of Aesop and what a great way to end a fable… listen.
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Yes my friend, I think listening teaches us about who we are and how we are all together. Thank you for the notice, this dream felt primal, like Aesop.
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beautiful Lona
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Thank you Maureen.
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Wind drifted
Back softly
Stilling their hunger,
Whispering one word…
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“Listen.”
so beautiful – to just be called like that, and still the heart for a moment – your poem takes me on a journey deep into my own solitude
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The wind is one thing that calls each of us, and touches us all, both in solitude and across oceans. Thank you, Gina, your words mean a great deal to me.
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oh always a pleasure to read your heartfelt words Lona
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This is enchanting, Lona. In middle school, we studied “origin stories” from other cultures. This reminds me of the beauty of those…the stories of how the world became.
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I am so glad you see that aspect. I dreamed this as I was waking up this morning, I had a profound feeling of peace lying next to the wolf, fear having vanished. I read about Native American symbolisms for rabbit and wolf with great interest as I started the quadrille.
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Nice lines: ““Blossoms are many
Steeped in morning glisten.””
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Thanks Frank
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I loved that it was the wind to bring the calm, the pause to listen. I used to work in a Native American daycare/preschool. The wolf, rabbit, flowers and wind were words we spoke in Ojibway to promote the native language. Just a little share of Ojibway translations in case you are interested…..
Wolf = ma’iingan
Rabbit = waboose
Wind = noodin
Flower = waabigwan
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Words are an entry into understanding of a thing if not the thing itself, I am grateful for the translations, and tomorrow will see if I can find a pronunciation guide. So much of the world is lost when languages are lost. Wind figures so critically in so many cultures, a breath of life, or alternatively a storm force. Thank you for sharing your feelings here, and for hosting this go round Mish 🙂
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Nicely done. Like the lesson of it all. Listen.
Pat
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Thank you, for listening here with me a bit then 🙂
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This IS like an origin story, and/or a fable. The directive to listen is said so beautifully–whispered. I especially love those last few lines.
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Thank you Merril
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This is lovely – both concrete and enigmatic for me. Very much enjoy the Blossoms/Blossom play. For a moment, I flashed to the scene in Bambi with Blossom the skunk in the mess o’ flowers, but of course the Rabbit there is Thumper.
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Yes, thank you Nora. Blossom/blossoms, Person/people. Seeing groups allows us to feed. Seeing a singularity allows us to listen. The Thumper/Flower thought makes me smile. 🙂
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Ooh, how magical is this revelation/observation! I love how “listen” is the word that stills “their hunger”. Such a ponderous word-play compounded by the gentle flow and rhythm.
This kind of craftsmanship is wonderful, Lona! It is always a pleasure to read you. 🙂
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Thank you my friend
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Rabbit & wolf – can they thrive?
Secret is to listen, accept & survive!
Have a great week!
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I like The couplet response, an anchored understanding of my song. Thank you Anita!
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Enigmatic and mystical, Lona, very enjoyable. the idea of “Awakening from nothing into loneliness” resonates particularly with me. I fear that hunger is never stilled for long. Perhaps eventually, it is possible to wake from loneliness, but what dreams may come then. Note: I “borrowed” that last bit. 😸
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What dreams indeed. This is such a poignant response Steve, feel a little more awake after it, thank you friend
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I read this beautiful poem as a spiritual yet surrealism of creativity.
You have a way with words which I love very much. 🙂
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Thank you, 🙂
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